Riding the Waves of Love...
Posted: Monday, October 26, 2009
by Alessandro Monte
Love is an ocean wide,
filled with tears that we cry...
Never knowing when is the next tide,
or when our hearts will run dry...
I feel the wind blowing through my soul,
I hold on tight, never letting it go
I ride the waves that life in me bestow,
and when i crash I'll let you know,
how this pain can brake one's heart,
but eventually from it will depart...
So keep traveling this ocean wide,
keeping God right by your side.
So please don't ever hesitate,
we only have one life, make your own fate.
Love is like the ocean, goes on for miles,
it is beautiful, it is rough, but it is worth our wile.
Find the rainbow that births from the sea,
love is the treasure at the end that will set you free.
And when you can't see where the ocean's end,
like love and pain, ocean and sky just blends.
It's a game of give and take
and many times one heart will brake
Bring tears to your eyes,
filling in that ocean wide
hurt and beauty no one denies,
but a picture perfect inside hide
an everlasting feeling for you and me
the most imperfect perfection two will get to be.
Riding the waves of love crazy seas...
filled with tears that we cry...
Never knowing when is the next tide,
or when our hearts will run dry...
I feel the wind blowing through my soul,
I hold on tight, never letting it go
I ride the waves that life in me bestow,
and when i crash I'll let you know,
how this pain can brake one's heart,
but eventually from it will depart...
So keep traveling this ocean wide,
keeping God right by your side.
So please don't ever hesitate,
we only have one life, make your own fate.
Love is like the ocean, goes on for miles,
it is beautiful, it is rough, but it is worth our wile.
Find the rainbow that births from the sea,
love is the treasure at the end that will set you free.
And when you can't see where the ocean's end,
like love and pain, ocean and sky just blends.
It's a game of give and take
and many times one heart will brake
Bring tears to your eyes,
filling in that ocean wide
hurt and beauty no one denies,
but a picture perfect inside hide
an everlasting feeling for you and me
the most imperfect perfection two will get to be.
Riding the waves of love crazy seas...
Alessandro Monte. 10/22/2009 (c)
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Top-level comments on this article: (1 total)Hey Allessandro,I'm not exactly sure what happened with this poem... it's really good!lol, what do you mean? Is my other writings bad?Haha, no, your other writings aren't bad, but they are sometimes difficult to read/understand without the punctuation and spacing. I know you write from your cell - which I'm pretty sure I couldn't do! However, this poem was spaced well, the rhythms nice - well done, so your rating should have reflected that! Good Work! :)Thank you I will keep on trying to improve and learn, have a wonderful day!
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